Surreptitous
The futile,
The reckless,
Close your eyes,
And believe in,
A thief,
Who could steal all this,
Devastating,
Destructing,
Seal your lips,
And give in,
A myth,
Who made this real,
Vindicating,
Justifying,
Open your hands,
And show me,
A seraph,
Who is crucified the paradox of its entity,
Someone who commits this heinous crime,
A crime,
To steal your tears,
Steal them from your eyes,
From the eyes of a effigy,
An effigy’s pretension to be a human.
The reckless,
Close your eyes,
And believe in,
A thief,
Who could steal all this,
Devastating,
Destructing,
Seal your lips,
And give in,
A myth,
Who made this real,
Vindicating,
Justifying,
Open your hands,
And show me,
A seraph,
Who is crucified the paradox of its entity,
Someone who commits this heinous crime,
A crime,
To steal your tears,
Steal them from your eyes,
From the eyes of a effigy,
An effigy’s pretension to be a human.
thought by Kreacher at 10:31 PM
1 Comments:
hey! I never have any sort of 'advice' for writers/ bloggers, because I'm not in a position to be giving any. Plus, your stuff is unique in its own right. you have good rhythm in your words and some of your imagery is very vivid. I enjoyed your page, and its also nice to see how you are maturing in your writing in a matter of weeks. this last post was much more mature than your first. keep writing, i'll be sure to check back often.
and thank you for taking the time to read my rambles.
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